A song I wrote, what do ya think?

Here's a song I wrote in school today, I call it 'Llama Comma':





I was takin a bath,


wonderin about that path,


where I was that thing, I had to laugh,


It was a llama comma!! HE HE,


LLAMA COMMA,


SKITZLE-DE-ZO


FRITZEL-ME-CO


DIDDLY DIDDLY DO


LOCCA LOCCA ROW FO SHOW





[does a lil hoe down dance]





While I was in sleepin'


in bed..


with my head propped up on the thread,


I pictured a LLAMA COMMA FRAPACHOMA


COMMA, COMMA, COMMA,,,,,,,,


We love the llama


who has typed the comma


and loves the


FRITZY FRITZY DO-DA-DA


FRICKA FRICKA DE-DE


LA DE DO FO


CAI SAI MAI CAR


LLAMA skitzay do da,





The next day I spotted my ma,


readin' a news-pay-puh,


with a llama on da top,


I said..MAMA MAMA YOU GOT A FRAMA YOU FRICKA FRICKA SAMMA GET OFF YOUR FAT GAMMA.


She say like dis, hell naw,


and I glance back and said..





Llama Comma.











Like it?


I think its inspirational, because people who put to many comma's in their paragraphs..dey think of my llama song and earase them quikly.

A song I wrote, what do ya think?
Definitely would not want to listen to it, didn't even bother to finish reading it.
Reply:You just took some words that rhymes with comma.


The song has nothing to do with commas, just some random words. Songs should have some sort of general connection with what you want to talk about. If you're going to make one about commas, try reminding people where commas go. Report Abuse

Reply:kewl!
Reply:I must sayah that the songa makes me laughfa becausesa it hasa many a comma. Now, I wonda how it sounda becausesa hereya it's justsa wordsda.
Reply:oh look, a llama song!!! great, a big inspiration to llama's


,,,,,,,,,,,,,,oh look so many llama's i mean comma's...hehehe!! great song
Reply:sounds like a spin on Karma Choma.





karma choma...and rhoma
Reply:the ending was funny


ya it's great but i din't get some of it.How old r u?
Reply:Awesome!
Reply:hahaha it cool
Reply:lolz


yep its really inspiring and uplifting


im so never gonna use as many commas as i used to ;D
Reply:That's actually the song the next American Idol will sing at the big finale.
Reply:......dude, no
Reply:HUH I HAVE AN HEADACHE ooo..